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It Continues..

19 Feb

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In the perplexed journey, it is not ending. Yes, the hour of distress, of ache and throb and all the gloom continues. Sadness is overwhelming. The route has been lost. It is but a bleak hour. The traveller continues the journey with the hope of meeting an end every other second.

In the cold and blue
darkness of the night,
I sit alone along the shore,
When the world is calm
and the sea is silent..

The moon shines
and the stars twinkle,
The tides rise
then fall,
The wind blows
and the hour mourns…

Lost in my aimlessness
I realize, nothing has changed
My sight is greeted
by the continued journey
of the harsh world…

But deep inside my heart,
In a corner of my soul,
Somewhere in myself;
A dream shatters,
A hope dies,
A laughter disappear
and a spark vanishes..

Like a blotch on the canvas,
Like a drowning ship of joy,
Like an orphan kid’s cry,
Like a dear saying goodbye..

In the net of my thoughts,
It flashes once again,
They asked me not to cry,
Never to shed tears,
Neither to weep, nor shriek..

But in the killing,
Nerve breaking and hostile loneliness
Of the stinging night,
My eyes silently rebel..

*CRIES*

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7 Comments

Posted by on February 19, 2013 in Memoirs, Poems, Random Thoughts

 

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7 Responses to It Continues..

  1. Neeraj

    February 19, 2013 at 2:51 pm

    Ah! You wrote it with so much feel!

     
  2. maryamchahine

    February 19, 2013 at 6:14 pm

    Very sad yet very emotive!

     
  3. janineyork

    February 19, 2013 at 10:21 pm

    Captures heartbreak perfectly. I very much relate to it.

     
  4. Eddie

    March 14, 2013 at 8:10 am

    Ok loving the feel you have portrayed in this one. Read it twice. The picture to go with it is excellent too.

    PS: lol I comment as I read. be ready to see so many comments lol.

     
    • Hira Nazir

      March 15, 2013 at 6:36 pm

      I am so glad you’re reading and actually leaving your say along. I am humbled. Thank you, Eddie. I love to have every person’s say and I fondly reply to ‘em. You’re kind to do so. =)

       

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